Daily Archives: May 14, 2016

Supernatural

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we were watching netflix on the tv  and we dicided to watch supernatural and we liked it

and in the first episode dean and sam were driving in there car to a case about a guy died in his car they defeated the white girl by taken her back to her house where she disappeared into the house were she stayed for eternatey  and they had another call cause a monster was eating people it was like a  vampire type thing  and it took campers out in the woods and they found the people hanging up bye rope in a cave when it came back for its next meal to feast on

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We were watching Netflix on the tv  and decided to watch “Supernatural”.  We liked it.

In the first episode, Dean and Sam were driving in their car to a case about a guy who died in his car. They defeated? the white girl by taking her back to her house where she disappeared.  She stayed there for eternity.

Later, they had another call because a monster was eating people!  It was like a  vampire type thing  and it took campers out in the woods.  They found the people hanging up by rope in a cave. It came back later for its next meal to feast on them.

my weekend

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on my weekend i went up to a freinds farm to stay the knight. we road the motor bikes around the farmhouse. had jumps and there was a track that led to those jumps those jumps were queit big and large our freind argay aired it but i didnt and i was on the four wheeler and eli was on the two wheller as well as argay ow and in the knight we went rabbit hunting but we caught nothing and we caugth some yabys there but they were to small so we through them back and we also stayed up queit late and we went to bed after that and when we woke up we  played on there trampoline and it was fun there on the weekend and then after we went for another ride  on the motor bikes in the morning and then after we went to sand dawood first then we went to lucky bay and then after we went back to there farm and road the motor bikes some more and then we had to go home and we watched netflix and had some lunch and we had tea later in the day but before that we were playing on the xbox360 and the playstation 2 and then we had tea and went to bed then in the morning we woke up and hanged out with uncle keny koda kade skilla and jake for the last few days until they left and koda kade skilla and jake went back to dongarra to stay with there mom again and uncle kenny went back to work  cause he had to so he could get more moneyand we just went home that was it the day was finished we went sepret ways they did stuff and we did stuff as well as uncle kenny.

fishing

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On the weekend (me and Lachlan) Lachlan and I went down to the pens to go fishing.  We chucked some squids on our rods and in 5 minutes I was on big bream way bigger than Phet’s. Lachlan took some sick photos of it then not long after I got another bream then bait fish and I think one more bream and Lachlan got nothing. 

After that we got nothing for ages and we were getting really bored so we were just chilling and we started to get really hungry so we went across the road to the Gorges Café where we both got a bacon and salad burger but we smelt so bad, like fish guts. We waited for our burgers and they were huge.  We were so happy, it was so nice, definitely one of the best burgers I have ever had.

When we were just about finished eating my dad came and said he was going to pick us up after then take me for a surf so we went back down to the pens for a fish. We didn’t catch anything for ages and we got bored but we were that bored we made a challenge to see who could wind their line in first.  After that we chucked a fish on the jetty and some dog came out of nowhere and ate it.   (me and Lachlan)  Lachlan and I felt bad because we thought that was going to kill it.  After that we got back to some fishing.  We were getting bites but nothing.  The dog came back and wanted to come on the boat and Lachlan tried making a bridge from a plastic bag that had our bait in it and all the bait fell out.

So yeah that pretty much it and I also dropped my rod in the water accidently.