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Refugee Diary Entry

Griffyn McWhirter’s Diary,

19-6-2017. At the camp right now. Alone.

So, this is probably the last entry. Why? Because today, I’m leaving the camp and I’m going home. I have to go back.

I know- people say that I should be grateful, and how I should be thanking them for ‘saving’ me from the dangers of my home. The whole town was bombed; the house I lived in is probably gone. But it’s been a year. A whole year. I have to check; shops might be rebuilt, houses might have been made.

It might be better now. I need to get back. I need to live again.

(-)

I have heard it, for sure this time. Refugees are becoming more and more unwelcome here; there are even attacks. Maybe going home would be safer than here. And anyway- my family might be there. My brothers… Mum and dad… Everyone. I haven’t seen them for months. I don’t even have photos. I never got the chance to bring any.

I wonder if my family is okay. They might’ve been kicked out of a camp already, or lost at sea, or…

I’ll just leave it there. I hope they’re safe.

(-)

Okay. I’ve got food and water. It’s nearly night I won’t be sleeping this time- the nightmares are too great. I have to start leaving soon. I will attempt to return with a boat. Several Australians are coming with me. We’re going home, or we’ll die trying. Or we can die here, anyway. Almost irony.

Alright. This is the last bit. Because of what I’ve written, I’m probably gone by the time you’ve read this. I’ll either be home or at sea. If any friends or family read this, I want you to return with me. I will see you there.

Griffyn McWhirter.

The Start.

Yeah, yeah. It’s taken a while, but the game’s been playing up.

I’ll post pictures for these stories, from now on. The images may be small, but hopefully you can see them.

This is just a draft, I’ll be making a new story soon. As well as that, the new story will be more refined and uploaded quicker.

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Feeling forgotten

How does feeling forgotten feel?

Feeling forgotten is feeling like you’re not existing, but can still see and do things.

People won’t remember you or care about you. You are nothing anymore. Anything you do right is forgotten, anything you do wrong is remembered.

Being forgotten is worse than being excluded because it can be anyone who forgets you. A friend, family member, people who you’ve just met, anyone. You’ll be there but not seen or heard. Nobody knows you even exist.

All in all, being forgotten is one of the worst things that can happen.

How it Feels to Be Excluded

I’ve forgotten a time I was excluded from something, but I can guess how you would feel.

You would feel lonely, empty, like nobody can see you. Nobody cares if you’re having fun or not, you’re just alone and no one knows.

It makes you feel depressed, which makes you want everyone else to be the same. Everyone has fun even though you’re not involved; left out, and it makes you want them to be depressed too.

Feeling excluded is like being forgotten; nobody knows who or where you are, nobody knows why you’re here. You’re just a nothing in the larger group of people.

You try to ask for help, or for anything, and everyone just looks the other way. There’s no light at the end of the tunnel. It’s you, and everyone on the outside of the bubble you’re in.

All in all, being excluded just hurts. Eventually people might notice you, but otherwise, it’s just empty space, you, and empty space.

                                                                                                                                                                                   -Griffyn McWhirter.

Chinese Horoscope; Horse

The year I was born in was the year of the horse. Horses are counted as people with contagious enthusiasm, happy, and having many friends. They enjoy chatting and have good images. Usually, they are brave, but can be cowardly. Although they love freedom horses are not truly independant, as they need support from friends and family.

This… Is not me. Honestly, I’m not that enthusiastic, and chatting only happens between close friends. I’m neither  brave nor cowardly; not running from things unless it’s the only choice, or the smartest one. It’s right when it says I like freedom, but after a while I need help from someone else (I’m scared of doing wrong and then having people tell me so).

Horses are known as the most friendly of all the signs. Being intelligent and attractive (For me, half of that is correct), you draw friends and family close easily. Despite being close to people, you need room to grow, space to roam, and freedom to do as you wish. You dislike being fenced in, and are frustrated and irritated by those who try to do so.

Again, mostly not me. Though some people say I’m friendly, I’m usually quiet and form friends by sticking around in places. Drawing friends and family close isn’t usually what I can do. Those that try to fence me in… Get nothing. I enjoy an enclosed place with a few things to do. I don’t really need room to grow. Those that smother my independence? Also nothing. I usually need help with things.

All in all, I have a close relationship with friends and tend to keep quiet. I’m intelligent but not that friendly. And, really, I seem like a monkey or a goat.

My Close Family

My close family is my grandfather and grandmother. Except, I’d call them Nan and Pop. It was just a thing I did.

When I was a little younger, my family lived close to their house. A short walk away and we’d be there, and we’d see Nan and Pop and stick around and watch tv and play games. Except, instead of just doing that, sometimes I’d see Pop doing work, and Nan cleaning or helping us out.

Now, I didn’t know it much at the time, but Pop taught me a lot. He showed me his favourite tin of liquorice ( He always shared a little with me; I got the taste for it from him.), and he showed me how to play chess. He was one of the best chess players I’d seen at the time, but it’s harder to remember for the moment.

Nan was always beautiful; she had beautiful hair, dark and pretty curly.

He was always around, and I’d always hug him. He had that weird smell that old people had, but I never really cared about it. He wasn’t towering and huge, but he was tall and had a large belly.

Christmas was great over there, Nan and Pop would always be happy. We were either at their house or out on the canal, looking at the Christmas lights. Either way, Christmas was great. Presents everywhere, walks over to a hill (We went there to take the dog for a walk and to run around.)

Pop showed us how to use the crab nets to catch fresh crabs from the canal, which we sometimes ate at the house. We sometimes fished with him, too.

One day, we got a new dog. She was an Alaskan Malamute, but only a puppy. And I’ve got to say, she caused a mess in our house. Ruining carpets next to beds, running around and howling whenever she liked. We couldn’t do anything about it in the end, but then Nan and Pop came along. They took her in, and within a week she still howled, but became a whole lot less trouble.

We moved away after a while, away from Madurah. Too polluted, a bit diseased, and too harsh for our family. Moving had two sides; We weren’t sick anymore. We instantly lost colds and fevers moving away. But the bad side was; our cousins, family, Nan and Pop, and other relatives, were away.

This meant visits down there were very rare. It was hours and hours away; we were lucky to see them twice a year. So this meant visits up and down were treasured deeply. Seeing Nan and Pop was always a dream; we walked up the hill, now walking their new dog, (Her name was Snow; she was a great big dog, but wouldn’t hurt a fly. Unless you were another dog.). Everything was good.

My Accomplishment from (year 5 – 6)

The story of my Accomplishment.

I was about 10 at the time. It was a regular, normal day when this happened; nothing much but work and play. I was doing quite well at the time, going a little ahead of other students. And then came along the testing for something called ‘PEAC’.

PEAC (Primery Extension And Challenge, or something close to that.) was a small program for talented primary students. I didn’t know much about it at the time, but I did the testing anyway. A few students and I were sat down around a table and passed a piece of paper with numerous questions and puzzles. By now I knew it was something important; we were sat far away from each other and the questions were not the normal ones.

A few challenging, some harder, and some easy. It was all strange but I did each question one by one until the test was ended. We handed the tests in and exchanged nervous glances between students. Then we waited. And waited. The answers never came in, and we got bored.

And then one day, it came back, with answers, tests and results.

I was the only one of my class to have finished the test with high results, just enough to get in. I was a part of PEAC!