Narrative Story

Boy have I got a story for you, it’s just the most amazing story you’ll ever read; nothing will ever be able to top this masterpiece. Are you ready to hear it?  Well, are you?  I don’t know if you are, you don’t look ready. Doesn’t matter, I’ll read it to you anyway.  Alright here we go.

It was a bright and sunny day after a week of rain, misery and most importantly, boredom. Rain is so boring, there’s nothing to do inside. All the board games are missing most of the pieces and reading’s pointless as I could hardly read back then. We had movies as well but I went through them all twice in the first day. It’s not like my brother would ever hang out with me, he’s always in his room and only comes out when he’s hungry. I wanted to go out in the rain so bad, but the second I’d open the door mum would be there to stop me. But today, that’s not going to happen, no more clouds, no more rain, just clear skies and a bright sun.

My blinds were left open and the light flooded my bedroom, I opened my eyes and realised that. I then leaped out of bed in excitement and ran into the kitchen. No one must be up yet; I wonder what the time must be? Anyway I get the milk and the cereal out and pour them into a bowl. I start eating it like there is no tomorrow, so fast in fact that I start choking on the cereal. I start coughing and spluttering milk and cereal all over the kitchen but I’m still choking. Mum comes into the room shocked by the sight of me on the ground. She picks me up and performs the Heimlich manoeuvre on me. I start grasping for breath and hug mum and she holds me tight. “I get that you’re excited,” said mum “but you need to settle down a bit or at least eat slower.”

After that I relaxed and watched telly for a bit, I was a bit shaken up and suddenly not too keen on going outside. That was until my mate was outside my window waiting for me to notice. I wave and he signalled me to come outside. I ran out through the door to another surprise. I tripped, straight into some fresh mud, luckily I was unharmed. My mate was laughing at me and I just sat there for a while.

That was my amazing story what do you think of it?

the time when i saw darth vader outside my bedroom.

once upon a time a few years back i was in my bed won night until i saw darth vader out side my bedroom door i screamed but i thought no body could hear me so i didnt scream after that then when i went under my covers i went to have a look agian but he was still there looking at me with a smile on his face then he went and then on a nother night i saw a ghost dog in the hallway and then the dog he went into my playroom and then went into the laundry and then the ghost dog disapperd like vanished into thin air and one night isaw ghostly eyes looking

at me from under my covers and then it was gone as well and then in the morning i woke up and telled mom about my things that i haved seen and then we chated and we laught and thats all by william leiper.